Coast to Coast AM with George Noory

[Username]

I wonder which staff member at Coast to Coast AM uses paranormaldate.com

[Sofia]

[Sofia]

[GravitySucks]

[21st Century Man]

So George no longer sucks?  I think that consensus may change especially after he interviews Dr. Richard Gallagher tonight.

[GravitySucks]

So George no longer sucks?  I think that consensus may change especially after he interviews Dr. Richard Gallagher tonight.

GNS

[TigerLily]

Hey, Grav. You're already a Jr. Member. Always the high achiever

[21st Century Man]

Hey, Grav. You're already a Jr. Member. Always the high achiever

Nice to see you've found your way here, TL!

[Dateline]

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[Sofia]

[Sofia]

Has your day been shit since Bellgab was flushed?  Clean it up!  We are all now in Ell.   "Grampers Pampers' has found the way and will keep you covered.  There are new live events with Norry featuring "Grampers Pampers".  I am so crapped, and I must drop them to you.

First there will be a "Grampers Pamper" cotueire fashion show.  Now, you can get hand designed "Grampers Pampers" designed by Norry.  Think Victoria's Secret, now you have Norry's Secrets.  I will be one of the featured models, and I am wearing the wizard ensemble.  Just as Grampers, it looks like shit.  The "Grampers Pampers" has a cape that discreetly covers the "Grampers Pampers."

And Norry, will hosting another live event.  Norry, or Honey as his mother refers to him as, taught Norry to crochet.  Now the newest live event will feature Norry's crochet circles.  This will be held at an undisclosed location when Norry is at the Lou.  For $100.00 dollars Norry will teach you how to crochet the lovely cape I adorn as my avatar depicts.  He will meet and greet you, and provide you with his own autographed mulch/fertilizer for your garden.  This is a new direction for "Grampers Pampers.", but Grampers will hold it tight and show you the way.  LIVE!

Free try-ons and he never charges for signatures,  He won't stop until everyone has a chance!

[Sofia]

I guess we should just ignore any typos/grammar errors since it already went to print?

I find 2 punctuation errors in the Coast to Coast AM version, with 2 additional debatable errors:
-In the first sentence, lack of a capital letter following a colon.
-At the end, "off putting" is supposed to have a hyphen.
-In paragraph 3, the comma in the middle of the first sentence is debatable but probably correct.
-In paragraph 3, a single is mixed with a plural but looks debatable.
B+

In the original version, I found perfect writing.  The only consideration would have been whether or not to use more semi-colons, but most people wouldn't, and he didn't.  A+

Filling in for Jackstar.

[GravitySucks]

[21st Century Man]

[Sofia]